It’s always humbling to discover how many syntactic and grammatical mistakes an English teacher can still find in my careless writing. Even more painful to be told that I have an ‘inefficient writing style’ when I had begun to think that efficiency and organization were my two redeeming writing virtues. Maybe I will give some serious thought to taking some of those writing courses offered by the SGS writing center. Afterall, I wouldn’t want to be a disgrace to my English subject teachers from all my years of formal Singaporean education :P
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Journey of the Heart 
Darling, dun worry. I’m sure the script writer must have been extremely critical when reading your piece (besides that’s his job mah), and that’s why he made so comments. No matter how well you would have written, he would still need to find something to comment and improve upon. Take his comments well and work on them. I’m sure you’ll become a better writer (from the already very good one that you are now) soon!
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Yah man! I’m sure you’re a better writer than me… think no one has that “primary school” handwriting that I have! *wink*
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Ouch. Oh well, there’s always the second draft. Which will be better and more polished because of all the comments she gave for your first draft.
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